Students' Essay

The following is a student's response to the question "What's your dream vacation?"

I want to go to an island during my summer vacation.  I wanted to go to Hawaii before this lesson, but now, I want to go to the Philippines, because I was recommended to visit the country.  The Philippines have more than 7,000 islands!  So I want to visit all the islands with my friends!!  I want to try surfing, swimming, scuba diving and so on.